Compare how attitudes to loved ones are presented in one poem from the Pre-1914 Poetry Bank and one poem by Carol Ann Duffy.
Chosen poems
‘Anne Hathaway’ (AH) – Duffy
‘Sonnet 130’ (Sonnet) – Pre-1914
Your sample introductions are a big improvement on the introductions you were writing earlier in the term, so well done.
However, you now need to consider how to improve them further. These are the things to avoid:
- Don’t tell me what you’re going to do – just do it
- Don’t spend ages building up to a point – just make it
- Don’t make general points about the poems – be specific
- Use evidence to support all your points after the introduction
- Analyse small, relevant, carefully chosen quotations in as much depth and detail as possible – quality rather than quantity
- Keep your comparisons brief, relevant and thoughtful – explain why this comparison is relevant to the question, what insight it gives us into the characters, themes, ideas, why the two poems are similar/different…
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Sample Introduction
Whilst the speaker of ‘Anne Hathaway’ (AH) conveys a sense of longing for her loved one, the speaker of ‘Sonnet 130’ (Sonnet)...
